Unbreakable

We are the stars
We are the constellations
We are the the ocean
We are the shore
We are the stretching roots
Of the great, might oak
We are connected
We are tethered
We rise together
We fall together
We are high together
We are low together
I’ve got your back
And you’ve got mine
Through good and bad
Thought thick and thin
We are unbreakable
~

4 thoughts on “Unbreakable

  1. You’ve got a good grasp of rhythm. I’d love to see you write a poem where you take one of the lines from this and really break that line apart. I had a read through some of your other poems, and the imagery you use is arresting and pulls the reader in, but I personally found that poems perhaps lost something with how quickly they jump to the next image.

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    1. Thanks for taking the time to read this and my other poems! I’m going to really dig deep in for the next one I write and really explore the imagery in my mind!!

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